Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Scott.

Well, that's a classic sound I've not heard in a while! There was a bit of unexpected dissonance in the chorus, but given the subject matter, that makes sense. Love the harmonies.

Since you used "obeisance", I had to look it up... and it's a noun. So I get to go all Grammar Police on you for that. laugh

Fun listen!

David, thanks. I hate to get English teacher nerdy on you, but "obeisance" is used as a noun in the song. It is the object of the preposition "in." It would be same if I had written "Kiss the ring in deference" but I then wouldn't have gotten the slant rhyme with forsaken. smile

Last edited by Ezekiel's Storm; 04/07/24 03:59 PM.