Originally Posted by firesong
Marty and Dave...there is absolutly nothing wronhg with this won...very kool lirycs and so whittie! their is somethinhg that reely apeels two me about this sonhg...I kan't quiet put my fingger on it just yet...but isle figuure it out...brilyant!!
Ah, good to know we speak the same language, Dan. You caught that intentional error too. Hope you figure out where to put your finger to find what really appeals to you. ==Wait, sorry. That sounds so wrong. Let's go back to our first language --the one with flats and sharps.

Originally Posted by rayc
Flames, smoke & a smouldering fret board kick this off really well & keeps he touch paper light.
Excellent stuff Marty & Dave. Wonderful.
Thanks, Ray. You too have an interesting way of saying things.

Originally Posted by Noel96
Hi Marty.

The song finished playing about 10 minutes ago and I can still hear it loud and clear in my mind.
This is such a brilliant write.
Everything about this grabbed me and held me.
You and Dave have produced a really fine piece of music.

Loved it!
--Noel
Wow! Thanks so much for all that, Noel. Much appreciated.

Originally Posted by Scott C
What a cool lyric Marty. The song really laid out the feel of the lyrics. Perfect vocal and cool basslines. Dave's biting guitar was perfect for the song as well. One of my favs of yours
Thanks, Scott. Really happy you mentioned the feel matching the lyrics --not always something I'm good at.

Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
Dave's guitar. Marty's clever lyrics. Everything is done right. Very convincing vocal. One of your best.
Thanks so much, Scott!


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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