Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Dan.
I like the song! smile
The intro didn't work for me. But that's probably just me - it was OK once, but repeated? And again at the interlude? Oh, no... wink
The song builds nicely. The harmonies are nice, but a some of intervals emphasized the synthy-ness of the vocals, like "I know he loves me" at 2:56. Then again, in a world of auto-tune, that's probably a feature and I'm just an old man shaking his fist at the clouds.
The "oohs" and "aahs" are really nice. Piano fills sound good, and the mix is excellent.
It feels a bit long, but not as long as it actually is, which is good.
Nice work, as usual.
David...thanks for your thoughts and comments...I always appreciate your technical insights and especially now that I'm working with the vocaloids...I took your advice and shortened the intro to one time around..it cut 16 seconds off and brought me under 5 minutes (that's rare!)...thanks for taking the time to give me some thoughtful comments...I appreciate it...Dan

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