Hi Dan.

This is an excellent creation and production.
I was captivated by your well-honed lyric writing prowess and your terrific use of Synth V voices.
The way your words flowed with rhythm and rhyme captured my imagination.
For example, the internal rhyme of "Jesus/decieve us" (verse 1) and "Jesus/leads us" (verse 2, in a parallel position to verse 1) caught my ears and made me smile.
That's sophisticated lyric writing.
In addition, both your melody and the chord sequence that supports it are stunning.
This is beautiful music smile

I really enjoyed listening.
--Noel


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