Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
That is a lovely engaging arrangement and the mix is excellent.
The synth vocals fit your lyric, melody and the overall vibe very well.
The ooh’s and aah’s are so smooth.
The band sounds like seasoned session guys!
Your instrumental performances are ace (loved the piano fills).
Enjoyed it!
J&B
J&B...thanks for your comments...I'm having loads of fun with my new kids...one failing voice a some new fresh ones are cohabiting fairly well...Dan

Originally Posted by Noel96
Hi Dan.
This is an excellent creation and production.
I was captivated by your well-honed lyric writing prowess and your terrific use of Synth V voices.
The way your words flowed with rhythm and rhyme captured my imagination.
For example, the internal rhyme of "Jesus/decieve us" (verse 1) and "Jesus/leads us" (verse 2, in a parallel position to verse 1) caught my ears and made me smile.
That's sophisticated lyric writing.
In addition, both your melody and the chord sequence that supports it are stunning.
This is beautiful music smile
I really enjoyed listening.
--Noel
Noel...thank you so much for your insightful observations...rhythm and rhyme...cadence and syllable count are high priorities for me in the writing process...thanks for noticing...Dan

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