Whoa ... I really like the overall groove. And that Bass at the beginning is wonderful ... then the rest joins in and my ear doesnt know where the melody line is?? There is a lot going on and it looses focus. Its interesting, but needs bring out the core melody, and have the other instruments support the lead lines.


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