(UPDATE#1)

I loved the sound of the opening - as a whole. It made me reach for the volume - sounds great Loud!
I'm almost certain I heard TP&theHeartbreakers from :16 to :19 (I've tried to recreate that sound and never got close).

The volume adjustment to the tracks right as the vocal starts needs something to ease the transition. It sounded like several faders were pulled down quickly at not quite the right time.... the transition at 1:40 could use a look, too.
The Bass sounds great. Very well mixed. Very musical playing.
I want the snare and kick to be louder (of course). The rest of the kit is fine.
The vocals sit in the mix nicely. They are quite infectious. I did not pay attention to the words - I was listening to the tracks/mix more. I'll do that part as you finalize.

Cool ending.

I like it.

fj