Hi Robert,

Good song and well sung.

Only suggestion - the vocals are ceratinly initimate but they are popping right out of my speakers and too many sss's.ttt's and plosives. You may consider redoing the vocals a touch further away from the pop-screen and mic or just edit these out in your DAW.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com