Hi Herb,

Great song and arrangement.

Vocals - very sharp and cutting in places - maybe an EQ cut at 3K.
Bass - definitely lacking bass to offset the vocal - much more bass. I would bring the bass in in the second verse.

NB I only make these suggestions cos I like the song.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com