Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
haha, I pressed play before reading your song description expecting to hear your voice in there, was a bit of a shock to hear the female vocal wink

Herb, this is excellent! Just a wonderfully written, emotive song. Vocal is superb, you have certainly mastered the synth vocals. Nice piano too, also liked the pad. Listened to both and prefer the first, the bass isn't adding anything the song needs IMHO.

Really good, very much enjoyed.


I really need to sing something and I have a few in the works that I might just do that with.
I wouldn't consider myself a master of the SV vocalists but I'm simply a student still with much to learn.
I'm still up in the air on the final version..... thinking I really need to fix a few of the nits in there first and then figure out what I really need to do to let this show it's better side.

Thanks for listening.

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www.herbhartley.com
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