Originally Posted by NigelSpiers
Hi Herb,

Great song and arrangement.

Vocals - very sharp and cutting in places - maybe an EQ cut at 3K.
Bass - definitely lacking bass to offset the vocal - much more bass. I would bring the bass in in the second verse.

NB I only make these suggestions cos I like the song.

Best Regards
Nigel


Thanks Nigel for the comments.
I'll have a more detailed close listen to the vox for what you mention. I've replaced the pad bass with a production synth bass and playing with it for a bit.

Thanks for listening and making your observations.


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