Originally Posted by Greg Johnson
A really nice, soulful song!!! A very ambitious rhyme scheme which you handled without a touch of rhymitis. Some really nice lyrics throughout!!! GREAT job!!! Take care. Greg

Thanks, Greg. As background, I had written the chorus first and didn't know what the verses might be. Then I found a set of verses on my iPhone notes app that suggested they might work. I edited a but then conjoined the two.

Fred


Fred Grittner
2020 iMac, Sequoia 15.5, Logic Pro
https://fredgrittner.bandcamp.com