Originally Posted by NigelSpiers
Hi Laurent,

Very good pop song - I particularly liked the vocals and the instrumental breaks.

Vocals - they could be made to sound more human if:
Verses - less words per phrase where a human would not have time to take a breath.
Verses & Choruses - reduce the length of the held notes at the end of phrases slightly.

Well done

Best Regards
Nigel
Thanks Nigel for the constructive comments.
Laurent