Donny, I agree with Ray.

Originally Posted by rayc
It's a nice, gentle song mate. The sibilant ESSES are pronounced though. I'd be inclined to address them as they jump out from the gentle backing and the general smoothness of your voice.

This is an excellent song.
Great vocal, lyrics and backing tracks.
Get those esses under control and you will have a winner.


I got banned from Weight Watchers for dropping a bag of M&Ms on the floor.
It was the best game of Hungry Hippos I've ever seen!


64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware