Originally Posted by jpettit
Great song Dan.
I do not usually respond to showcase post due to a fear of being too critical, but this is worthy.
I too am a Christian artist and it inspires me to post some of my songs here in the future.
I will offer one mix input.
On the B part of your song "Jesus came to break the fettered change", because the melody drops in register the words for that verse in the following verse need to come out clearer perhaps by slightly boosting the vocals or bringing the instrumentation down or more subdued.

Thanks so much for your comment and suggestion...that second movement has been a real challenge and volume is one of the challenges because of the unusual key change...the vocal register becomes really low...so I will heed your advise and try to make the proper (better) adjustments...it's great to hear from other Christian artists...we are challenged not only to make good music but also make sure our message is clear and true to our calling...thanks again...and blessings...Dan

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