Originally Posted by WaoBand
I love the way you always come up with a creative new angle in song lyrics. This song is particularly creative and the mix and instrumentation are ideal for it - and the video is a corker, too..
Thanks, Chay. Ha, those videos... did you notice the officer in her car? Very comical. Now, your vidz are flawless.

Originally Posted by Brad Williams
Oh yeah, Marty what a song. Soooo creative. My dad is retired California Highway Patrol, and you know I'll be sending him a copy of this one. He's gonna love it, just like I did. Wonderful stuff, I wish I would have written it! Great job! I laughed all the way through it.

Brad
Thanks, Brad. That is so cool that your dad is retired CHP. Much respect. I bet he has some great stories to tell.

Originally Posted by PeterF
Marty

Clever work, interesting lyric! Well produced track.
Good stuff.

Peter
Thank you, Peter. It should've read "Based on a true story (with plenty of creative licensing going on)."

Originally Posted by MarioD
Marty what an extremely clever song.
A girl on "funny cigarettes" driving the wrong way, a cop, and a tire flattening deer, who could ask for more?
Not to mention a girl friend call Marijane!
All put together in an outstanding groove, great vocal and backing tracks.
Loved it.
Thanks, Mario. Well, it's Sunday so I hope you and Bob are at it again.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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