Originally Posted by Bass Thumper
Clever, funny and unique, and love that bass.
Great job.
Thank you, Steve.

Originally Posted by Greg Johnson
WONDERFULLLLLLLLLL MARTY!!!! Simply a HILARIOUS. play on words, a such a cute story!!! You sing the hell out of it too!! Take care. Greg
Thanks, Greg! Love your enthusiasm.

Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
“A swirling smoke then spilled from her car. She said, "I'm glad ta see ya."
It was her who called it in. So that's when I got my first sense o' Mia.”

We can see her smiling so clearly from the above and we think you should write short stories. 😊

This is another fun song, Marty, and your vocal delivers the wry humor well.

Great band along with your fine performances and mix.

And, per always, cool supporting imagery in the vid.

Fun!

J&B
Thanks, Janice & Bud. I wasn't sure the lyrics could give the visual sense, but CoPilot in all its wonkiness REALLY helped. Some say I should stick to the "Yeah, yeah, yeah"s when writting songs, and save the real stories for books that no one will read. Seems like I don't have as much control over the process.

Originally Posted by Elliott Kayne
Such a Cool Song cool I really like this one !! Great Story in a song, and the tracks you used work perfectly for feel of this one.
Thanks, Elliott. The sirens are intended to freak someone out if they're listening to this one in a car. hehe

Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
Red-eyed Marty, you sure a getting clever in your lyrics. I dig that piano and the bass line. Good vocal performance. I have to admit, I had to look up "sinsamllia" to see exactly what it was, event though I could guess from the context.
Thanks, Scott. I remember thinking the red-eye flights were the party planes. hehe

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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