Originally Posted by Dewey_MI
Really enjoyable song to be sure! One suggestion is to put a melodic lift to the chorus. You don't have to change the chords just lift the melody. Regardless, I like the sentiment the vocals and style choice!

Dewey

Dewey, thanks. I'll keep that in mind moving forward. Thanks for listening.


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