Hi, Herb.

Nice! Good write and it sounds good on my speakers.

I would have liked to hear some harmony on the chorus, though. Make your singers work! wink

You might want to re-type the lyric at 1:44, Solaria is singing:
   Ever mile we travel/bring us one step closer...

I suspect it should be:

   Every mile we travel/brings us one step closer...


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?