Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Herb.

Nice! Good write and it sounds good on my speakers.

I would have liked to hear some harmony on the chorus, though. Make your singers work! wink

You might want to re-type the lyric at 1:44, Solaria is singing:
   Ever mile we travel/bring us one step closer...

I suspect it should be:

   Every mile we travel/brings us one step closer...

Thanks David, I can always count on you to find the glitches in the matrix.

So I went in and added a harmony to the chorus and I like it. Good advice.

The typing was actually correct but for some reason it didn't get treated properly by SV so I edited it phonetically and waaa laaa... yep, sounds better.

Thanks for listening and picking the nits.

Listen to the song again.... I did upload the new version to both links.

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