Cool tune. I don't think the first part fit like it should have. It was quite different from what followed.

The music is good. I like the industrial sound going on.

Side Bar: If you ever get to New Orleans, you should absolutely take the time....a complete day is a good idea, to visit the WW2 Museum. It encompasses 6 city blocks with hundreds of thousands of artifacts from the war. Well worth the time. Did I mention that my daughter works there? Her job, among other things is to find the veterans of that war and bring them in and give them the "Red Carpet" treatment with a tour of the museum and some of the city, and get them back home again. If you can, they even have a hotel that they own that is decorated from the front entry to the rooms in the deco style of the 40s.

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www.herbhartley.com
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You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.