Nice work.

That guitar certainly sounds good with nice high end. The vocal could probably use a bit of sibilence control. It sounds a bit bright on these speakers. I'll listen later on something else.

Using the microchords is really helpful. However, I am impatient and often don't have the patience to go through a song measure by measure tweeking things. Maybe I need to develop patience and slow down.


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You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.