That's a unique song. It has a Bowie kind of groove. Some of the chords have that feel.

The chorus gets better and gives it a nice momentum.

Regarding the lyrics and message..... Spot on. There's so many lies constantly from practically every single direction it's hard to discern the truth anymore. I take everything I'm told by anyone as possibly true but probably not until proven to be true beyond a doubt. Sad that we live in such a world where everyone thinks they have to lie about even the smallest things.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.