Great stuff Thumper.
My mind wanted the industrial rhythm and melody to match - or at least resolve together.
The flow of the progression, once it dominated, was graceful and pleasant.
I like the sound of your voice but the narrative about the woman missing her man, living alone etc. didn't really resonate with me, I assume that is because it presumes that every Rosie had a man away at the war...it's a bit tidy I suppose.
Hey, this is my sick brain twitching so pay me no mind if it doesn't jibe with your perspective.
Fab stuff.

Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe