Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I LOVE your lyrics, I hope you find someone to contribute some vocals for you.
For my taste, the backing tracks sound too happy for those lyrics, but it wouldn't be the first song where that very contradiction makes it work.
Thanks BD. No offers so far re vocalist. I might have to invest in Synth V - 'Kevin' sounds pretty good).
Mike
Originally Posted by floyd jane
Beautiful
It is obvious you put a lot of time and effort into this
Enjoyed
Thanks for listening Floyd. Much appreciated.
Mike
Originally Posted by animarorecords
Hello Mike,

I'm sure that with vocals it would be a great vocal song.
But the chord progression and melody are so beautiful that it works as an instrumental song too.
The lyrics are very sad, but half of pop songs have heartfelt lyrics.
I'd love to hear a version with vocals.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Thanks for your kind and generous words Shigeki.
Cheers,
Mike


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