Yeah... I remember you. I don't recall why the dust would need settling.... but hey... The real question is does the dust ever really settle?

Cool song. I heard a few sections that were kinda busy. The easy fix is to not have two things "jamming" at the same time. Basic rule of thumb is only one instrument gets to solo or fill at a time. If both parts are playing something really cool.... chose one. What I like to do is let them trade parts back and forth....OR.... if that same break opportunity comes back around.... the second time, use copy/paste and put the really cool part in there. Another option is to drop them both out and let the rhythm handle it. That also puts some very nice dynamics into play.

I enjoyed the song.

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