Hi Izzy,

I read about your fear you would be forgotten, or dust is alover you.
Then I read the posts of people here. Most of them are very nice and also helpful in their views on the song.
I saw 'a busy' midpart, female vocals that didn't fit properly and you, needing mix advices. So I got curious and took a listen.

Probably you listen to all of the advices and changed parts in your song ormix, because I heard a most entertaining song!
I heard a good mix, nice female yelling on the backgroud and a very good lead vocalist.
So, a goode song and no complains from my side. Well, ok, maybe one thing I can think of.
I missed a break, or silence, then a bridge (or the other way around) and then the continuing of the song.
Maybe with a transposition to give it more tension. But, you don't have to. It is a good song after all!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130