James, really love the outside piano accompaniment in the first version and all the little tensions with the lead vocal. It's a form that I just like a lot, even though the 2nd version is a lot safer musically, and still sounds great. I would recommend a few more variations in the vocals, such as small timing or inflection variations in the 1st repetition of "we're worth fighting for" to make the vocals breathe more like the piano. Great job!


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Presonus Studio One
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Too many guitars (is that a thing?)