Cool rocking song. Good job on the mix.

I'll echo what has been said. Lyrics are always helpful. It is really good for considering the overall writing of the song and makes it easier to understand exactly what you want to say.

My only issue is that the bass is a bit on the lite side for this genre.

Overall, nice job.

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