You created an interesting sound. You might have gotten what you wanted out of the horn tracks, but the sound is unique. Excellent work with the synth voices. I agree that this would make a good show tune. The sax solo sounds made for the song.
My favorite line:
"Tell me if I'm distant
and I'll kiss you on your nose"
Thanks for your positive feedback

Glad you liked that line, especially when I asked AI about the lyrics and it said concerning that line: "a sweet gesture, but it might not fit the tone of the song entirely. Consider a more passionate or pleading action". I didn't change that, because AI seemed to miss the point of learning the "right" gestures gradually, passion would come later.
Janne