Hi, James.

Nice! smile

I missed the prior versions, so I'm sure I'll be covering old ground.

Eleanor "swings" nicely here with those triplets, and that's fun to listen to.

The changing of the rhythm at 2:22? Not expected at all, and very cool! laugh

Did you really intend to put two "buts" so close together? Hrm... That didn't come out the way I intended it to. wink

   Remember, baby, we're but human
   But our love's worth fighting for.

Perhaps:

   Remember, baby, we're only human
   And our love's worth fighting for.

I think we're only human is a much more common phrase, and comes off as less formal.

The lyric We're worth fighting for sounds to my like We were fighting for. It was only after I checked the lyrics that I saw what it was supposed to be, but I'm still not hearing it.

When I first heard that long note on the flute solo, I wondered if there were a stuck note or something. 18 seconds it way too long to ask a flutist to play a phrase without some sort of catch breath.

But those are just my standard nits. Again, nice work!


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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?