Originally Posted by MarioD
Brian, you said "I wanted the song to feel like a journey stopping at several stations while telling a story", well you managed that with perfection.
Those tempo changes were spot on.
Your song hit home as my uncle worked on the rails here in the USA during WWII.
Your vocal was super and was the lyrics.
Outstanding song.

PS - loved that last chord!

Thanks MarioD.

It was my most challenging biab arrangement to date. It took a lot of trial and error to get it sounding right.
Thanks for listening and I'm glad you could relate to the story. That is the best reaction for any songwriter.

Regards
Brian.


Songwriting punctuates our lives. It is alchemy, turning pain into gold.
Songs choose their composers when they enter the world.
I try to remain open and ready.