Hi James,

I've listen to both the 4th and 5th iteration of your song.

Lovely melody
Lovely vocals

Suggestions:
1. Piano - the fills should be between the vocal lines not over the top of the vocalist. So you may need another piano part for the Rhythm Piano when vocalist is singing - plenty of excellent ones of BIAB to choose from.
2. The instrumental section soloists should be at the same volume as the vocals - much much louder - otherwise the song can fade away.
3. Vocals - need a cut in the mid to low frequencies - they are boomy and not crisp.

These are not meant to criticisms - I only make these suggestions because I like the song.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com