Originally Posted by floyd jane
Brian,

Nice impassioned vocals.
Good use of BIAB.

There is tremendous rhythm/cadence in your combination of lyric and melody.
Few songwriters get to the point where they understand and incorporate that into their attempts .
That makes the way this song SINGS one of its strength - maybe The most important.
By the end it becomes real Earworm.
Kudos.

fj

Thanks Floyd.

Your comments are often deep and considered.
I really appreciate your thoughts.

Regards
Brian.


Songwriting punctuates our lives. It is alchemy, turning pain into gold.
Songs choose their composers when they enter the world.
I try to remain open and ready.