Hi, David.

Good write. The first chorus sets things up so you know what's coming:

   Prayers seem to go unanswered
   Dreams seem to be denied
   Cause we always want something
   Then we want some more


and the rest of the song delivers the goods. Well sung, nice build, solid arrangement - all around excellent work. smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?