I really like that. The streets of Philadelphia.... Rows of brownstones. It's very reminiscent of Springsteen's writing about the girls in the seaside towns of South Jersey. 4th of July Asbury Park.... Etc.....

I really enjoyed the song and your friends unison behind you really works better, I think, than prettying it up with harmony.

Nice job


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