Welcome to the forum, BB.
Beautiful song with lovely vocals and harmonies, I really enjoyed listening to it.
For a first song with BIAB you're doing really well, definitely better than my first song.

Since you asked: there are some easy-to-fix mixing issues:
  • the bass is a bit too loud, I would turn it down a bit so that it plays well on any system.
  • the drums could be a bit louder and have almost no bass foundation (but it could be that it's hidden under the loud bass and is fine once the bass is less dominant).
  • vocals are good, for me they could be a bit louder (because they are so good), for others they could have more reverb.
    Both are a question of personal taste. If in doubt, just leave them as they are now.


But as I said, your song and the production are already pretty good [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]

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