James, I like this cut down version better.
On thing though is that there are a lot of sibilance. You may want to get a De-esser plug-in if you don't already have one. Here is a list of free ones:

https://www.bestfreeplugins.com/plugins/effects/de-esser-01.php

Note that I have no experience with any of these.


I think my wife has started to show the first signs of dementia.
She said she can't remember what she ever saw in me!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware