That was a cool journey you took us on. With just enough lyrical content to put us in the song with you. Having been on ships in the ocean during "not so calm" conditions..... I can relate to the "rather crawl than walk" line..... and from the details in the story, it wasn't exactly a Disney cruise ship.

Well done.


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