I'm in a minority of one I know but I loathe the here for you/there for you thing. It became currency very quickly.
The song is a nice change of direction for you - tonally & atmospherically. The vocal is effective if a little stilted.
I think I'd prefer your voice.

Last edited by rayc; 09/13/24 01:05 AM.

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rayc
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