Originally Posted by floyd jane
Marty,

A very clever write.
An excellent Band.
Good vocals (both smile )
Solid mix.

Fun listening.

fj
Thanks, floyd. Much appreciated. You understand why I gave her a Y in her name, right?

Originally Posted by Heartbreaker
Very cool - sounds great!
Thanks much, Heartbreaker. Welcome. Looking forward to hearing more of yours.

Originally Posted by jannesan
Sad and strange story dressed to a refreshing western mood. Enjoyed the catchy melody and how the vocals excel in performing it. Great arrangement, the banjo, the fiddle, the solo - all very effective. And clever video, the AI image generator's inability to create proper words fits the lie theme funnily smile

Janne
Sad, and maybe strangly common these days, but that just might be my cynicism showing. Yeah, if I was into getting subs and comments, I'd create contests with these, asking folks to find the AI's mistakes, which almost always shows up in the words and human appendages.

Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
Sounds like you and Charley had fun making music together!

The banjo was a nice notion and an additional reminder of “Little Liza Jane.” smile
As always, the vocals (nice harmony intro) and bass are most excellent.
Nice tidy solo bit too! ... sits very well in.

The lyric is creative and witty indeed.

Love the depiction in video of the “powers that be.”

Nice mix with all those acoustics having their place.

Cool!

J&B
Thanks, J&B. I really enjoy how you guys listen to all the parts so closely. Even happier when you like what you hear.

Originally Posted by Elliott Kayne
This is really great!! You had me from the harmony in the intro. Everything works in this song. The story, the overall feel, the backing tracks, mix, production. I think this one of your best.
Thanks so much, Elliott. Glad you liked it!


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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