Hi, Ron.

Well written story, appropriate arrangement and vocals.

Loved where you backed the instruments off for that stanza.

Shades of Mary Robbins, with the main character dying in the end.

Nice! smile


-- David Cuny

My virtual singer development blog
Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

BiaB 2025 | Windows 11 | Reaper | Way too many VSTis.