Hello Music Lovers,

Just finished this baby, song #4. I present it for your listening and commentary if you have any suggestions for improvement or things I should think about as I work on song #5. The link is private for the time being, until I run it through your ears. grin

https://soundcloud.com/divinemetime/the-sweetest-place

I used more instruments and did a lot of editing via the piano roll. Vocals are mine. Just added dynamics and reverb on the lead.

****** Song Summary *************
Title: The Sweetest Place
Soloist track has 806 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Style is _SACRED.STY (Sacred Modern Country Worship)
Style MIDI Instruments are : Bright Piano (2),
RealTracks in style: 4020:Bass, Electric, ModernCountry16ths Ev16 075
RealTracks in style: 2540: Pedal Steel Background Modern Country...
RealTracks in style: 3520:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Americana16thsDelayBrent Ev16 075
RealTracks in style: 680:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm RockBritSoulful Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 803:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm DrivingCountryBalladClean Ev 065
RealDrums in style:AmericanaRoots16th^01-a:Toms , b:Snare

O---overlooking the waves of the sea
In the misty darkness a shadow I see
Am I asleep or awake
As you reach for me, as you reach for me

Nearing the cliff of ancestral power
Time shifts to the bewitching hour
Sprig of mint to keep me present
You hand me the flowers, you hand me the flowers

In the Sweetest Place, led there by grace
I walk through the mirror, my step with yours apace
Run with the offering, run with the offering
Back to the Sweetest Place

O---ver your shoulder, a bag of magic tools
Sweet whispers, sweet wisdom, sweet rituals
Step out of my universe
The mystery pulls, the mystery pulls

In the chill of this enchanted night
You offer me a tea that fills me with light
We leave but I’ll return
Yeah, I just might, return some night

Thanks for listening!