An interesting lyric and a nicely mixed backing band.
There were places where I felt the melody didn't quite gel with the backing (e.g. the second half of the line "And yet, I'm happy I shall live in all the music I can give."
Asterian was a good choice for this song but it can be quite difficult to get synth voices to sound 100% natural. Still, you did a pretty good job. smile

Ghostgum