Hi, floyd jane.

Excellent write, arrangement, singing. So much goodness here. For example, the construction of the chorus...

To point out the obvious (since you co-wrote it),
The title gets placed at the start and end of the chorus:

   IF YOU'D ASK, i'd tell you that i love you
   ...
   you could have me in a heartbeat, IF YOU'D ASK

But that's not enough, as it's used to develop the chorus:

   IF YOU'D ASK, i'd tell you that i love you
   IF YOU'D ASK you'd know i never stopped
   IF YOU'D ASK about the future
   i'd forget about the past
   you could have me in a heartbeat, IF YOU'D ASK

It's only rhymed once in the chorus, which gives it weight:

   IF YOU'D ASK about the future
   i'd forget ABOUT THE PAST

Of course, none of this means anything if it doesn't pull the heartstrings. And of course, it does. smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?