Hi Vic,
What a perfect example of America at its best. Great story and excellent portrayal thereof. This is also one of your best vocals.
If I may, one small suggestion for your consideration:
In the first line of the first verse, this came to mind: "I once was a wandering soul".
Keep or sweep as you choose.
Great song - great delivery!
Alan
Last edited by Al-David; 09/25/24 07:01 AM.