Hi Vic,

What a perfect example of America at its best. Great story and excellent portrayal thereof. This is also one of your best vocals.

If I may, one small suggestion for your consideration:

In the first line of the first verse, this came to mind: "I once was a wandering soul".

Keep or sweep as you choose.

Great song - great delivery!

Alan

Last edited by Al-David; 09/25/24 07:01 AM.

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