Nice one...a couple of quite loud sibilant spots but no big deal for most folk. The slightly intimate/confessional vocal style is an interesting contrast to the show tune melody and message.
Well done sir.
Thanks Ray for your kind comment

I could make sibilants quieter by isolating the aspiration parts from the vocals to own files, just hadn't done it because of the extra work when the vocal part is under work most of the time. The more intimate vocal style for the song was intentional, I wanted to the vocals be closer to the singer of the dream (of the band behind the inspiration).
Janne