Originally Posted by laurent4114
Well composed, well paced, well sung and well mixed.
I say: Well done!
Laurent

Well...

THANKS for the listen, Laurent!

Originally Posted by rsdean
Ron,

Awesome song! The lyrics are very clever. Love the arrangement and mix. Great lead & BGVs.

Excellent work - this one has it all!

Bob

Thanks, Bob! Yeah, those lyrics slay me. Dusty crushes the vocals as usual. I'm just hanging in there with the BGVs. But if I keep it low enough in the mix I can't spoil the song. Ha!

Originally Posted by Guitarhacker
Clever write. That was fun and engaging. It kept me wanting to hear more of the story and a cool twist there at the end.....

Some of the lyric phrasing was awkward to my ear but it worked out for the greater good of the song.

Appreciate that, Herb! Yes, the lyrics do a great job pulling the listener along. I really admire that, and it makes it fun for me as well. The twist in the end is very cool, but also (to me) ambiguous. Was the narrator an escapee returning to the lab? Or a new member of the menagerie? Or was the love interest the escapee? Or...??? Any phrasing awkwardness is my fault. I've been told I'm just like that. Sorry.

Originally Posted by floyd jane
HAHAHAHAHAHA

So very clever.
So very original.
And very DAD CRoW. Y'all have a truly distinctive style. I thought the band needed a name. (So I made one up).

Nice use of BIAB.
Good mix.
Cool write.
Good vocals.
Fun & Upbeat.

fj

Gee, Floyd...Googled "DAD CroW" but not sure I'm getting it. It does sound cool. The name of our fictitious band came to my lyricist in a dream. We don't use it, but it does pop up in a lyric or two. Haven't posted one of those yet. "Fun and upbeat" is a nice capper. THANK YOU!!

Originally Posted by MarioD
Ron, what a very clever song
Loved your vocal and lyrics
Outstanding backing band and mix.
Loved it!

PS - Am I going to be forced to get a vaccination for this HP, Honolulu Plague?

Mario, THANKS for the listen! Y'know, we both made it through a GLOBAL PANDEMIC, so I'm going to say...No. There are probably enough antibodies in our bodies to make it through the Bubonic Plague. Ha! Glad you liked the song!

DC Ron
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