Originally Posted by NigelSpiers
Hi Herb,


This is very good - lovely melody and well sung.

My only suggestions are:

1. Would loved to hear a big bass when she starts the second verse.
2. Louder Guitar in the instrumental break.

Excellent.

Best Regards
Nigel

I thought it was.... And yeah... Me too but I really wanted the strings to carry that part not the guitar.

Thanks for listening


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