Hi Brad,
I love the background on the love that inspired this piece. I also really appreciate the uplifting lyrics of faith and trust. But to me, the song sounds rushed, and probably not to your surprise, a bit busy though I can't comment further on that because my ears don't know why, musically speaking. Lyrically speaking, you could probably prune the lyrics a bit and still say what you want. But I think there's a super potential here for an inspiring, moving song. I look forward to hearing its evolution.